Wednesday 15 October 2008

Arrow

This is where  we stopped to rest for a while. Four months passed since .  
The Konfessioners are now busy with certain less important chores of their lives, and have handed over the reins to us , The Three Musketeers :)
This is only a time-gap arrangement amd we eagerly await them to return to there usual posts. Till then we , the musketeers will try to hold post as best as we, DokSaab, Juhi and Ruchika, can.
So till the time we get the takes on the new word, we present before you the five odd takes we received for the last word, Arrow. 
These are not up for Kompetition though.

Arrow

n.
  1. A missile having a straight thin shaft with a pointed head at one end and often flight-stabilizing vanes at the other, meant to be shot from a bow.
  2. Something, such as a directional symbol, that is similar to an arrow in form or function.


Sweta (117)

Following His release from  Underground, On His way back to Hades, Cerberus fell into an alternate world. 
Where some of the local folk indulged in gluttony even as their fellowmen starved to death.
Where one hand helped, the other stabbed.
Where they acted like pigs unabashedly then worried about becoming obese.
Where their frontal sympathy was followed posteriorly by "I knew it".
Where honey toned words disguised poisonous intentions...

Cerberus was brave, but these natives frightened Him. He wondered why his three heads scared mortals possessing infinite faces to go with their heads. He prayed to the Gods and tail tucked twit his legs He shot away like an arrow from a bow, hoping to hit home.

Nandini Sen (120)

Cupid’s work life’s in jeopardy. Big Boss is displeased.
Shooting his arrow on a victim is easy. But the work behind it is tedious. It takes time filling each arrow with the love potion, which in itself is pure and hard to get.
His opposite number from Satan’s team is acting faster. He’s mass produced arrows, filled it with cheap juice, and shoots blindly.
People are falling in lust, and even before Cupid can shoot the love arrow, the side effects of the cheap juice ensure jealousy hit the victims harder, leaving the heart (where love potion is injected) scarred.
Cupid needs help – more helping hands, more conducive hearts. He’s on a recruiting spree – do you wanna join his team?


Dok Saab (63)

Can you see the head of that bird?
Which bird, O Master.
Can't you see the bird sitting on that branch?
What branch, O Great One.
The tallest branch of that banyan tree.
Sorry Master, I cannot see the tree.
Then what do you see?
One eye is all I can see.

That's perfect, O Parth, your arrow can never miss the target.


Sowmya (113)

When his visitors left, he turned to his wife. "I have to do my duty."
"The consequences can be terrible for you."
"But they are right. Think of that young girl. It will make a world of difference."
"I'll come with you."
Armed with his bow and arrows he began his journey accompanied by his cuckoo, parrot, the gentle breeze, the lovely season of spring and his ever-loving, dutiful wife.
Their presence made the atmosphere cheerful and him hopeful. He saw the girl arrive. This was his chance. One arrow should do the trick. His wife prayed. Just as Kamadeva fired his passion filled arrow at Lord Shiva, his third eye blazed open……..

Priyanka (118)

It was the end of November. Ayodhya had been decorated lavishly. Lord Rama had come back after fourteen years of exile, vanquishing the rakshas raaj of Ravana. The glory and bravery of Lord Rama and Lakshmana, told and re-told; their heroics making the whole country rejoice. Rama, Sita and Lakshmana were clothed in the best of silks and jewellery. The priests chanted their mantras and the devotees offered their prayers in the huge temple. It was a sight to behold. I knew the photographs would come out beautifully. As I stood in the open courtyard, in the chilly night, I thought, "Lord Rama could have done with one of those nice and warm shirts from ARROW. It’s freezing."



3 comments:

Sarang Mahajan said...

Great to see the klash up again! :)
And also great to know the posts on arrow will not go unread. :)

Ruchika said...

Well, I’d decided to let others start with the commenting but all of a sudden, everyone seems to shy away. So…

1)Sweta – Congratulations! For steering away from the regular and common usage of arrow. Like expected, most of us shied away from the word and the courageous few who did write, ended up writing about Cupid and Indian Mythology. Not that it’s easy writing on those topics either (I should know! I couldn’t come up with even a sentence!) but yours was refreshingly different even in the usage as a cliché. Personally I abhor clichés and from a writer of your caliber I expected you to atleast modify the cliché from “shot like an arrow” to ricocheted or zipped or some other arresting word. Yet, yours was my favourite for its simplistically ingenuous interpretation.

2)Nandini – I love the descriptions. You create wonderful imagery with the words “people are falling in lust…scarred”. If this were a bigger piece I would love to be able to read your description of how the potions were made. Simply because you are so vivid in your descriptions! And a very nice approach to yank the reader into being a part of the narrative. Ending with a nonchalant question! I was even enticed into nodding my head in affirmation!

3)DokSaab – I KNEW someone would write on this and I was wondering and wondering how something so done to death could be done beautifully! And that is all I have to say for your piece. You are delightful in how you’ve made the common seem special. Such simplicity is the proof of intellectual writing! (I’m also very green with envy!)

4)Sowmya – I had no idea about this particular bit of mythology and the way you’ve started the piece makes is sound very contemporary. Then the lines about the bow and arrow age it a little to make me think of a time gone by like some 100 yrs ago and then you call him Kamadeva and whoa! I’m in mythological India! How can you do soo much in 113 words? I’d have used pages n pages and not succeeded. Delightful read and made me more aware of my culture. Thankyou.

5)Priyanka – I’d been so sure someone would write on this too that when I read the first line I thought…yayy I KNOW how people think! And then you just made mythology so contemporary. Wonderfully delightful approach! ARROW shirts! What a hoot! Now that is contemporary mythology! What an ingenuous perspective! How did you come up with this. Do tell!

NonsSens said...

Hey thanks Ruchika -
for actually going through each of these entries and commenting on it.