Thursday 20 March 2008

Strength

Strength



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Juhi the Fragrant (119)


Her strength lay in her honour, she knew. She knew what she had to do. Her war weary hands cradled her son, for the last time. The child, his face splattered with gunpowder and her blood, gurgled happily. The stench of battle no longer suffocated him. As the sound of the thunder of hooves grew nearer, she looked at him with a forlorn gaze, his dancing eyes reflecting her loss.


Finally, with an inhuman effort she gestured. Krishnabai took him in her hands and made him clasp his small palms around the handle of the flaming torch. The child suddenly cried out and protested, as if sensing the danger. But, Krishnabai was firm.


As they rode away, Damodarrao cried.



Mandappa KC (108)


I could trample a thousand souls

My words could kill a hundred hearts

My actions bereave a score minds

And my glance could silence mouths


But a little butterfly could melt my soul

A glancing wink could melt my heart

Dylan could melt my mind

A lollipop could melt my mouth

How strong am I?

Strong enough to stand my ground?

Strong enough to flow with the crowd?

Strong enough to carry you? Am I?


An ant made me wince in pain

While I withstood the howling monsoon rain

I build a thousand fires, but I'd burn in the same

How strong am I? How strong am I?



Rush.me (119)




“Did You Hear, Tina Is Expecting A Child??"

"Tina Didi, Mummy Ne Yeh Badam Bheje Hai… Chhote Baby Ke Liye"

"Tina, That Girl Na, Who Went Abroad For Studies… Some Bartending Course…Huh!! Some Guts This Girl Has, I Tell You!!"

"Didi, Yeh Baby Ke Papa Ki Photo Hai??"

"I Also Heard, She Met Some Online Friend Of Hers And Went For A Holiday With Him…Didn't Even Think Of Her Parents Once…."

"Didi, Agar Boy Hua Toh Name Hoga Tarun Aur Agar Girl Hui Toh..Umm… Teeshaa… Okay!! "

"But, Weren't They Planning A Marriage Or Engagement Something?? Whatever, The Forefather's Name Is Gone, Forever"

"Didi, Papa Ne Kaha Milk Peeke Strength Aati Hai… Aapko Toh Bahut Jarurat Hai.. Yeh Lo!!!"



The Red Ronin (120)

a single bead of sweat trickles
down, through short hair
over the mighty brow as the nearby vein
pulsates steadily to a rhythm, designed
by a lean heart steady yet intensely aware
of peculiar modulations abruptly rising
in anticipation of the signal; emanating
from the uppermost echelons of power and strength.




a tiny messenger departs towards the ancient heart
bearing wisdom to engage in action the grand organism
known only by man as mighty. The resulting synapses
sparkle and crackle and infuse the ancient one with a viguor,
unrelenting and unrepentant. This insane passion
explodes from deep within, tearing apart limitations
and renders asunder the truth; in melancholic form.
The finale ends with a resounding clap as bone meets bone.





Dok Saab (120)


"Now break this",
Grandpa had tied all the sticks together.
Gaurav Couldn't.
"See! Unity is Strength." Grandpa smiled.


"Baba, that saying is outdated.
I couldn't, doesn't mean it can't be broken.
Those sticks broke because they were rigid.
This bundle is rigid too, and you just need more force to break it.
Try breaking this, Baba"


Gaurav gave him a rubber stick.
It just bent and bounced back however hard Grandpa tried.


"See you could not break even a single stick.
Do you know why, Baba? I'll tell you why. Because it's flexible.
Baba, in this age of single child and nuclear families, unity is meaningless.
The real strength lies in the ability to bend during adversity and bounce back."



Nandini (119)


I looked blankly at the question “What is your strength”

Was it -

My smile? Granddad always said I could get away with murder with my smile.

My sharp tongue? Used to the hilt, while ticking the errant gardener, when the

waspish oldie hid our cricket ball ,when the irritating salesman didn’t take no for an

answer.

Spinach? Mom always heaped our plates with it, saying, “it’ll give you

strength”.

“Spinach” was my scribbled answer.

The interviewer looked and remarked “Ms Sen we asked for your strength, not

your eating habits”

Sigh!!!! Mom you were wrong.

I tried to smile – the interviewer just looked stony.

Grandad you were wrong too.

I felt too weak to try my third strength.



Jyoti (122)


RUDABA

Rudaba was the eldest of Shamshuddin's eight children. Losing her mother at 11 left her a blurry eyed drop-out from school and a mother to her siblings. Her marriage to Abdul Rasheed brought her to the town. But Rasheed' s accident shattered her dreams of studying again. Austerely, she resolved to educate their son Munawwar.

This afternoon they were going to a fair after school. She had been pinching pennies. He ran out of the school gate shouting with joy "Ammi nayi topi …" , not noticing the truck. She shrieked "Munna, mere bacche…."

The headlines read: "40 kg woman stops 400 kg truck: saves child". Her small room was filled with cacophony " What gave you the strength?"

Ruda whispered, "Love"


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Manu Maharishi (75)


S- (to begin with) is Superman wearing underwear over his pants.

T- is Thomas Edward Lawrence's maddening desire to be extraordinary.

R- is Randle Patrick McMurphy's rebellion against the tyrant Nurse Ratched.

E- is Erin Brockovich's fearless self-conviction and blatant sense of humor.

N- is (also) Norman Bates's insanity .

G- is Gandhi agreeing to partition.

T- is Terminator's journey of realizing 'why humans cry?'

H- is Hoover Family's last performance in Little Miss Sunshine.



Coffee is my poison (117)


dedicated to my parents.

from strength to strength.


i hated you

you didn't let me

just...quit.

picked me up,dragged me through this

murking binness

...life.


you were my strength

when all seemed wrong

lifted me up

you made me strong.

from you i learned

right from wrong


never to hurt

always be polite.

you gave me

my conscience

that inner voice,

telling me whats right.


you are the ones

who put me

before yourselves

always,in everyway.

forsooth,even when i can't see you

you are with me always


telling me what maybe

best for me.

and i hurt you

yelled at you

misunderstood you

certainly i hated you.


you still loved me!

cared for me!

put me ahead!

the only issue in your life was me!





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Konfessioner Singh (117)


It was an accident, my hearing it on the phone.They didn’t know how I would react, besides it just wasn’t the done thing. Young girls from good families take such news calmly, over a glass of milk perhaps. So, I was to be told and someone had to do it.

The phone had been ringing for a long time now; parallel connections always cause twice the trouble. I put the receiver to my ear and focused on the clock…

He’s gone.

4:00 a.m.

Early evenings in the porch… arguments… long walks…days at the farm… books…bridge… who would fill those hours?

It’s six years since that dawn, it took more than strength to pull me through.

56 comments:

ruSh.Me said...

Yahoooooooooooooooooo...UPDATED!!

ruSh.Me said...

i feel something's not right with Nandini's Entry.....Words are seemingly chopped off..?????

Unknown said...

@ Konfessioner Singh,
Is this about your GrandPa ?

Unknown said...

@ Rush.me !
Copy Nandini's take and paste in notepad, and Voila you'll see the entire uncut version ;)
Enjoy

ruSh.Me said...

N-Joyed!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Unknown said...

Only Ten takes :(
Where are you all, Sarang, Mickey, Richa(Krishna), TD, Priyanka, Mowgli, Trapti,Kavish, Diva,etc etc.
And Vaidehi, it was your word?? .


We all miss you all !

Unknown said...

So much for those who missed the klash,
But the ten lovely takes more than make up for the absences.
And as ever, two more new entrants.
Manu Maharshi, the name's very familiar on Orkut(LBC), Welkome !!
Jyoti, One more Physician joins the Klash Klan. Welkome Dr Jyoti.
Jyoti was so excited to be part of klash that she wrote 1000 words for Strength, but then trimmed it beautifully to 122 :)

ruSh.Me said...

1000 ----> 122 words....wow..kya kamal ki editing ke hogi...I can just imagine...!!

@ Jyoti:
can we read the Entire UnCut Version anywhere????? :D

ruSh.Me said...

@ Juhi:
Damodar Rao, as my History Reminiscence tells me, was the adoptive son of Rani Jhansi Bai....!! but could not place Krishna Rao...! Kindly throw some light on the matter..!!

Kaveesh said...

Welkome Welkome Jyoti and my dear Manu...I guess thats all that's left for em to do..
I keep welkoming everyone to klash and keep fading away myself!

Neways have a great stint with klash..what a gr8 place to be..Indeed!

N dok saab..loved what u wrote..haven't gone thru the others'.

coffeeismypoison said...

helloo!
lovely klash,if smaller than the previous ones...!welcome to the klash Dr.Jyoti...
so wen do we komment?

richa said...

wooohooo WOW!!!

richa said...

not been well...but will definitely try and comment :)

Mickey said...

Hi All !
Lovely takes :)
Today is Ms Konfessioner Singh's Birthday, lets all wish her a very Happy Birthday !!
@GSV-
See Virmani sir, how fast people forget, Doksaab has remembered eleven people and you are not one of them. You , the winner of Krown so many times that people wanted a law enacted to bar winners from taking part !!
@All those who miss my take, its there in my blog, but my kreator did not permit me to send just to show that he is too busy :(

Unknown said...

No Komments koming , and its Holi tomorrow, so I'll make the first move.
But first let me wish Konfessioner Singh a very happy Birthday!!!

Unknown said...

My Komments (in no particular order)
Coffee is my poison----
When I first met you(online of coarse :), yet to meet u f2f), I had an impression you hated your parents. But your take clarifies your position. That hint of anger was because of your stay in an alien land, alone. True, Parents are our strength, one realizes only when they are gone.

Juhi said...

Hello everyone, Happy Holi for tomorrow.

This seemed like a pretty tough word to crack, and for a while I thought that this time too, I would not be able to klash. But, I guess I really wanted to.

Dear Rashmi, Damodar Rao is, as you correctly reminisced the adoptive son, or rather was, of Rani Lakshmibai. KrishnaBai not Rao, is an imaginative name I conjured up for her second in command.

Komments koming up...

Juhi said...

Oh by the way, Happy Birthday Shinjini. Lots of balloons and festoons for you.

What's wrong with Nandini's entry???

Unknown said...

Jyoti ----
Mother's love for her child can give her so much strength. Your take was a bit dramatic though. I have read somewhere about the turtles, the mother turtle remains on one shore while the eggs are on the other shore, it’s only through her vision that she hatches them.
Jyoti, Thanks for taking part, I know you are busy trying to get admission to residency program in Medical colleges in US.

Unknown said...

Konfessioner Singh----
Departure of someone close is agonizing. No strength is enough to bear the pain. Time only numbs the senses, but the scar remains, and hurts often. Its now 16 yrs since my dad went, but your take made my eyes wet even today.

Unknown said...

Manu Maharishi ----
When I got the word for klash, the first image that came to my mind was that of the Mahatma. Yours is the only take that remembered him, and few other strong people, including my childhood hero, Superman. Nice debut Manu !

Unknown said...

Nandini ----
Your sharp tongue may have saved the day for you Miss Sen, but had I been the interviewer, your innocent reply would have been enough.
By the way, being a child specialist innocent smile is my weakness

coffeeismypoison said...

HAPPYYYY BIRTHDAY SHINJINI SINGH!!
MAY ALL THE WISHES THATRE GOOD FOR U COME TRUE!!

Juhi said...

mandappa:nice work. really brought out the comparisions between the strong and the weak.

rush:the reality of a two faced society. good job.

ronin:wow!

dok:mesmerising and awesome. loved it from the start to the end. hats off!

nandini:followed dok saab's advice. cute, almost mickeyish.

jyoti:flowery welcome. gosh, we seem to be a big attraction to the docs?? anyways, was a bit dramatic and filmy, but a good take.

manu:a festoony welcome to you too. a unique take, obviously. reminds me of my not so distant past when i sat with my mates dishing out similar stuff under school desks.

cimp:excellent tribute to parenthood.

konfessioner:sad, and touching.

my vote? DOKSAAB

coffeeismypoison said...

apparently its komment time...here goes then!in order...of appearance.

juhi : wow.i could feel the dust n dirt...and the sadness n the pain.perhaps u shud consider a longer story on the same topic.

mandappa : every mans story isn't it?strong in some ways and weak in the smallest...well done...a different effort.

rush.me : an unwed mom?ouch,yea thats someone who can use all her strength and then some...!excellent work.

the red ronin : im not sure i got it...are we talking physiology here?

doksaab : MY VOTE!

nandini : u brought out a great point...we shud al know our strengths and utilize them as n wen required...gud work,cute i thot.

jyoti : welkome to the blog and may i say...amazing editing...cud we see the uncut version too?v.poignant Dr.

manu : nice work...certainly it was different...and u were the only one who mentioned gandhiji...good work.

CIMP : hmm...what wud daddy say?

kon.singh : HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!i didn;t know a cup of milk was the traditional way to deal with it.is it really?or did u make it up?but certainly...the most strangth is needed in a situation like urs..

NonsSens said...

Shinjin - Many, Many Happy Returns of the Day.

DokSaab - Thankyou so much for giving the solution on "how to read my piece"....I was maha perplexed seeing half the words eaten up....but looks like ppl r following your advice & r managing to read it :-))

NonsSens said...

(Nandini) -

Happy Holi to everyone.

Here go my komments & vote -

JUHI - Strength in her honour. Well potrayed....always nice to read historical facts peppered with creativity.

MANDAPPA - The "every body" song or I should say poem....somehow all your takes have a lilt to it - almost seem like songs.
Liked it....the ironic disparity of being a tower of strength & weakness. (Just technically speaking tho' - wasnt the word Strength....and not Strong)

RUSH - Loved the last line....wonder why society is soooo uptight & moralistic rather than compassionate & understanding in many a situation.
A contemporary isse potrayed nicely.

RED R - Hmmm - rhythmic, different & nice. Infused "strength" pretty dramatically.

DOK SAAB - Simple, nice and super potrayal of the theme. The last line was the clincher.

JYOTI - Welcome.
Very poignant piece. Strength of love is indeed very, very strong.

MANU - Welcome to you too.
Heyy...innovative potrayal of the word.You bet each of those characters needed strength to potray their USPs.

CIMP - A backhanded tribute to your parents...I really hope you get them to read it - am sure they'll get sentimental with this piece of yours.
Really well written.

KONF SINGH - Sigh!!!! Losing a loved one always requires something beyond "strength" to help get used to not seeing them around & settle down to the "new normalcy"....Its a feeling I relate to very much.
Hmmmmm

My Vote - DokSaab

coffeeismypoison said...

hmmm komments flowing real fast...
@nonsens : backhanded?pata nahi...i thot it was just plain honest.i guess all kids at some point 'hate; their folks...whether its for living in a different country than where we were studying in college or denying something we dont realy need..yeah i dont think i have the nerve to get my dad read this...they dont even know i write here or anywhere!

@doksaab : sir ive actually read more than one real life account abt men/farmers actually lifting up trucks weighing tons wen they saw their kids trapped under it.i think Dr.Jyoti's take may have some truth in it...

Unknown said...

Back from vacations, Happy Holi All !!
the remaining komments and vote:-

Juhi the Fragrant ----
Another take based on history :) good one , Juhi, but not like your previous takes.

Mandappa KC ----
Some very beautiful thoughts!! True strength is such a relative concept.
But you could have easily fitted in the theme word somewhere with 12 words to spare.

Rush.me ----
Tina doesn’t need the strength of badam-milk to withstand the onslaught. She seems a strong modern girl able to take her own decisions. Nice take.

The Red Ronin ----
Power and strength oozing from your take, have you studied human physiology, Ritesh.

My Vote
To Nandini

For interpreting the word so differently :)

r3flux said...

'appy holi! may'll dance on the myriad hues of the rainbow!

now here we go: ahem..
@juhi - astounding! gnawing potrayal of the strength required to part from a loved one.
@mandappa - aah.. the anguish of uncertainity whilst at the pinnacle of one's strength
@rush.me - im uncertain abt the plot but im guessing its a bitch session against a woman who's found the strength to have a child out of wedlock? feel free to spank me if i'm wrong ;]
@doksaab - yipee! what an analogy! my fav: rigid vs flexible! to answer ur Q: jst started studying physiology :] btw its a description of the process behind a 'punch'
@nandini - LOL! u need to spend more time taking killing klasses ;]
@jyoti: this source of strength beyond muscle, bone and nerve is chronicled as 'prana' in indian science and 'qi/chi' in the oriental sciences. If one were to notice babies who sometimes weigh light as a feather when they want to be lifted and heavier when reluctant. they can also grasp objects so hard considering their muscles and bones are barely developed? not to dampen the 'love' angle but any extreme emotion has been known to trigger the same results.
@manu - hilarious dude! jst 'G' was outta my comprehension orbit :P
@coffeeismypoison - incredible chronicle of a journey that takes many, more than a lifetime to traverse. A rhyme in reverence!
@konfessioner singh - aah.. your soliloquy reminds me of a nightingale's song - so beautiful yet so sad.

r3flux said...

My Vote: Konfessioner Singh
The Red Ronin

Juhi said...

Hullo? It's Sunday night! Late latifo! Hop to it :D

Juhi said...

"but not like your previous takes." Is this good or bad, Doksaab?

from Confused.

ruSh.Me said...

Apologies People!! Busted with Holi and traveling around...but i guess Kommenting and voting is till on!! :D

ruSh.Me said...

@ Red Ronin:
Partly true...the bitching session is full on...but i guess u missed the tiny talk of the younger sister....Whose words are the Bigger and Better Strength-provider that any Badam-milk or medicine..... :)

ruSh.Me said...

@ Juhi the Fragrant:
Her strength lay in her honour... I guess that says it all.. The Honour and pride during those days was the Ultimate!! Wonderful content!

@ Mandappa KC:
Introspection??
self-realization??
Strength??
weakness???

@ The Red Ronin:
Good Study of the Body Functioning!! Realistically Put!!

@ Dok Saab:
New meanings to the New Adages in the Modern World!

@ Nandini:
I just wonder what if you had made use of that 3rd strength of Yours!!??? LOl....Nice!!

@ Jyoti:
Amazing!! I was already impressed by the Editing work done by you!! The Content is very heartfelt!!

@ Manu Maharishi:
Very Well-written and differently thought!!

@ Coffee is my poison:
tribute to the Parents! True...Sometimes we just under estimate them and their affection!!

@ Konfessioner Singh:
Absence that can never be made up for!! Grief and Honestly put!!

ruSh.Me said...

My vote????
Dok Saab is as usual Wonderful...
Nandini is too good for humor itself!!
Jyoti is impressive and dramatic...

but my affinity...Manu Maharishi for the different way of putting together S-T-R-E-N-G-T-H

Unknown said...

@ Juhi
No Juhi, Not that this one is bad, but this take of yours lacks the fragrance your previous takes, had, esp the one on Sugar, and of coarse addiction.

malted socktail said...

hey all...
sorry for the delay, but i was off resting in my abode in the hills for the weekend.. will komment soon...

@nonsens: well i do write lyrics so they usually have a lilt...

and the word is Strenght... but i think we did go over the argument, whether u have to use the word... the word is the theme... and thats bout enough.. you dont have to use the word to feel the word. ! :P

NonsSens said...

Malted S - Wow a lyricist....cool. Hmmm no wonder your takes are so rhythmic.
And prob I missed that discussion abt feeling the theme word ...rather than using it forcefully (at times).....great.
It makes more sense.

Dok Saab - Thank Sir for voting for me :-))

Rush.Me - Using "3rd strength" many a times backfires....(reminded rather painfully by mom & gleefully by bro')a sharp tongue is often the downfall of many a thing!!!!

ruSh.Me said...

ab zara vote tally ho jaaye...!!
me, the total timepaas.....!!! :D


Dok Saab: 3 (Juhi, Nandini, CIMP)
Nandini: 1 (Dok Saab)
Manu Maharishi: 1 (ruSh.Me)
Konfessioner Singh: 1 (Red Ronin)

People left to Komment and/or Vote:
Konfessioner Singh, Mandappa KC, Jyoti, Manu Maharishi!!


Kindly Korrect me IF I Err Anywhere!!

richa said...

richa.krishnawonderful take everyone...sorry havent been able to komment..have been bedridden for the past few days and although i have read the Klash faithfully, dont have the "strength" yet to komment extensively. but if my vote would have counted I would have voted for...ohh well it doesnt count anyway :)

heady concoction said...

hi!!
nice takes everyone....
i was neck deep in work this week...so could not participate...though was following klash religiously.
a belated happy b'day to shinjini!!!!
....waiting for the NEXT word.

malted socktail said...

wats going on ?

Unknown said...

Your Komments and Vote, Mandappa ??

Juhi said...

Where is everyone?

NonsSens said...

Knock, knock....hi, hello - itna sannata kyun hai bhai (errr such trying to quote the famous Sholay dialogue)....but whats up guys????

coffeeismypoison said...

oh thank goodness!some life at last?so who wins?whats the new word?whens the last date?if ppl have not voted yet...let it be n just count the ones that r already here.if we do that...doksaab wins.right?

richa said...

yeyyyyyyyyyyyyy Klash is still alive!! where are the Konfessioners? Doc saab u have any news?

Santonu said...

Cipher from konfessioners. Why, i hope we didn't go back to last year's situation. Shin r u busy?

coffeeismypoison said...

HaPpY NaVrAtRi to all the klashers n konfessioners...!hope these 9 days help u,in one way or another!God bless you n your families!

NonsSens said...

Thanks CIMP, a very Happy Navratri to you and your family too.

Happy Navratri wishes to all the Klashers too.

Willy Wingfoot said...

People..Sorry...i have been hibernating.....!
But its about a week since i woke up and now i find klash following my trend!!!

Are we gonna get a new word???

Unknown said...

Mera Krown kanhaa hai Konfessioners !!!!!
:((

coffeeismypoison said...

KONGRATS dok saab!!!a well deserved win n now finally we have our next word!!!!!!!

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